” I pushed my way through dark smelly bodies and burst into the circle of light .” This quotation shows tension because they had to go through bodies in the dark not knowing the danger surrounding.
because it was dark they had to walk to the Circle of Light.
March 18, 2015 at 10:37 am
You have chosen a quotation that could potentially show some tension and attempted to explain why.
To develop:
Introduce the scenario – what is happening in the chapter at the time?
Focus on the ‘smelly bodies’ as well as the darkness – How does Scout feel about being surrounded by strangers she does not know? How is this shown?